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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2004-05-27 12:08 PM

my heart...
  is smooth
reassuring

       and it
is wiser
than I could ever be

        I hold it
gripped whiteknuckled
  on red

        and it cries
my unborn

       and it cries

for me

           and I try

to make it proud

misao
Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 50

1 posted 2004-05-27 12:11 PM

*ahem*

What my MOM says...

(laughing)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2004-05-27 12:14 PM

You...

are the most real...

you peel the layers back, and make japanese art out of ME.

and baby?

that's GOOD.

love you my love.

(yeah. Like that.)

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-05-27 01:02 AM

loosen the grip, and it will beat freely, and the blood will flow to extremities...and deposit wisdom..in hands, in mind...and eventually to those you touch.

...and us folk in the peanut gallery..smile at you Mr.Sites

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-27 03:38 AM

cool

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2004-05-28 08:38 AM

nice...and compact, this totem.

Sort of a Popeil Pocket-Fetish

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-05-28 08:52 AM

enjoyed it so much I have saved it to remind me of...

M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-05-28 08:55 AM

Gawd...this is excellent...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-05-28 09:05 AM

I hold it
gripped whiteknuckled
on red

~*~

You grip more than this.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-05-28 09:52 AM

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-05-29 01:50 AM

Your style is brutally beautiful -- and you are a pleasure to read because of the honesty in your penning.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2004-05-29 01:53 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Bri...

You are amazing...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2004-05-29 03:11 AM

Oh jeez Brian, this is just beautiful.

I'm keeping it.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

13 posted 2004-05-29 03:22 AM

interesting

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

14 posted 2004-05-29 12:13 PM

neet!

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