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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-05-26 08:16 PM


So like the fruits of blessed spring
Of thee cloud bursts that love may bring
To shower down a whimsy way
Surround my steps a flutter May

By now the sounds are echoes past
And yet return each smile cast
The smooth of simple but a leaf
Before my breath pursed puff and brief

Yet still, of every tuck away
Along the sleek of you to play
And know that ne’er a time could take
These visions bold will not forsake

And ne’er alone to face the space
Containing lipid loves soft grace
A precious part held dear my heart
In petals fall but beats apart

So like the drizzled morning rise
Upon my skin your brightest eyes
A song that keeps good company
Aflutter through each part of me

Copyright Kkh 5/26/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 2004-05-26 08:32 PM


Soft and uplifting, this!


Corinne

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-27 04:11 AM


nice
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3 posted 2004-05-27 06:01 AM


I like I like

Tara

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-05-28 04:37 PM


Enjoyed...James
marcel
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5 posted 2004-05-28 06:46 PM


beautifully written poem, i can feel hearts dancing around my whole persona. love is wonderful!
MGROVES
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6 posted 2004-05-28 11:50 PM


yes beautifully writen


iliana
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7 posted 2004-05-29 12:22 PM


ThisDiamond -- That last stanza was the icing on the cake!  Lovely!   ....jo
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