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Open Poetry #32

The Wrong Turn

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2004-05-26 12:42 PM

I use to sit and wonder
About life and all the pain
Not knowing which way to run
In the sunshine or the rain
The mountains seemed so endless
The oceans were very deep
Not knowing which way to run
In the shadows I did weep
The sun was never warm
Stars never shined bright
Not knowing which way to run
When nothing was in my sight
I only needed your warmth
During the cold winter days
But you knew which way to run
Opposite of my way

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-05-26 12:49 PM

Oh my, the ending was unexpected. Don't know whether to laugh or cry. Enjoyed.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-05-26 02:57 AM

sad for sure

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-05-27 12:43 PM

I've had a few like that...they make their way around...James

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2004-05-27 12:47 PM

oh! I wasn't expecting that kind of an end! how sad, I know that feeling unfortunatly...Great way of expressing yourself though, very lovely write.
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

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