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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-05-26 12:14 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

You are the mist lying low over the valley
You are the wind that moves through the trees
You are the gull that glides over the ocean
Your touch is soft like a warm Summer's breeze

Your kiss transports me to heaven
Your love flows like a mountain stream
You are my every wish come true
For you are my ultimate dream

You are the first Spring flower in the meadow
When the harshness of Winter is no more
You are the rustic leaves of Autumn
That fall softly on the forest floor

Your love is of great importance
With you I stand ten feet high
My love for you is endless
It reaches far beyond the sky

You are the chain around my neck
You hold the key to my heart's door
You are my very reason for living
I've not known love like this before

You and I have much in common
Ours is a special chemistry
You've made a difference to my life
And you mean the world to me



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
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Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2004-05-26 12:16 PM


Beautiful!!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-05-26 12:20 PM


One of my favorites...silky...James
Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-05-26 01:01 AM


So very romantic.  Do you by chance write historical romance?  You very well could.  You have a beautifully eloquent way about your expressions.  

Smiles -- Susan

P.s. I used to hang out with several romance novelists -- fantastic ladies

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-26 02:54 AM


a true love

well written!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2004-05-26 03:19 AM


Very very nicely done!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

GlisteningRain
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The clouds
6 posted 2004-05-26 04:06 AM


Admirable
eor
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blues & greys
7 posted 2004-05-26 04:12 AM


Beauty is truth, truth beauty

suthern
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8 posted 2004-05-26 04:05 PM


How beautiful... how romantic... how true. *S* Excellent write! *S*
rosepetals25
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9 posted 2004-05-26 04:09 PM


Aww... this makes me wish my honey was home so I could tell him how much I love him

Tara

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2004-05-26 07:02 PM


This poem was the result of one of my many daydreams.  Where would we be without our dreams?  Thank you for all your wonderful comments which are so very much appreciated.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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