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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-05-25 03:22 PM

You bring the women in me to originality
Transforming, I become a painter of camaraderie
In you, there are no little things…but a mysterious
Earth all in itself…incredibly, a lifetime of listening
Discovering expressions by our choosing, influenced by feelings

Standing before the mountains, our sodden cloths grinning
Affronts to receptiveness, where light summer stirs beginnings
Harmony exaggerating our faces, like faltering steps of kings,
The longer I know you, the more I make of life’s mysteries
And the secrecy of small common things, a fascinating grace

Together we have a meaning, never before touched upon
The ocean wind in the sky sings for eons
Wherein I’m lost in infinity, forgetting is vanished
You’ve opened intense sonnets, nourished
Where I love sleeping

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-05-25 04:49 PM

You have captured a most pleasurable
moment...with such grace, and such wisdom.

Thanx LeeJ...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-25 05:04 PM

"Together we have a meaning, never before touched upon
The ocean wind in the sky sings for eons
Wherein I’m lost in infinity, forgetting is vanished
You’ve opened intense sonnets, nourished
Where I love sleeping"

What a beautiful and peaceful place...
How I love this Lee....this is special..
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2004-05-25 07:28 PM

*faints*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-05-25 07:33 PM

You glide through verse after verse while reading this poetic masterpiece.
Wonderful write Lee J.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-05-25 08:10 PM

This is so beautiful, Lee. I really
enjoyed reading.

Hugs,

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-05-26 03:23 AM

dang!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-05-27 12:24 PM

Beautiful...James

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

8 posted 2004-05-27 12:32 PM

simply beautiful...so touching, what a wonderful love poem, your expression was amazing and your feelings shown through. Absolutly beautiful write.
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

9 posted 2004-05-27 01:47 AM

Wow! Excellent! I really loved this!

Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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