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Bars Of Flesh
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Bars Of Flesh |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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Bars Of Flesh To be trapped within, is possibly the worst of all prisons. 'Cause no one can see what it takes just to breath. Worse yet knowing that nothing has you locked inside... Unless you consider the hold of which your own chains bind, and hold you down. No check in, No check out, always here, forever in doubt. No one to set you free 'cause no one knows where you are alone inside this hell tending to your scars. 'Tis an awful place to be locked inside this prison, deep inside of me. It's funny now that I can't remember the pain that it took to find happiness... [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (05-25-2004 07:57 AM).] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very powerful! Strong emotion! Great job! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it is  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes it is and you've spoken for many others |
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