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Second Coming!
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Second Coming! |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Second Coming * investigating in the yard he stoops and strokes the new grass he fingers the pebbles and the trees and laughs at passing bumble bees * his second spring, its all so new he's less than 2 foot tall running to see and smell and touch a thrill of discovery and all * the wind in his hair the sun on his face the lawn is his Eden, magical place * past 44 winters and springs-- Surprise seeing life fresh through a child's eyes! * |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PictureMe~ What a poetic blessing is this~ Delightful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Oh, how Wonderful! A child's perspective does add a whole new way of looking at the world, doesn't it? Loved this!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful! And, refreshing! |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Thanks for your comments....a close to my heart write! May we all see thru the eyes of a child. pictureme :-)  |
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