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Love Angel Junior Member
since 2003-11-04
Posts 25 |
Remeber those days when, We'd stay up til 2 a.m. Just planning our future, And how we'd be togehter. And you were my hero, And I just want you to know, Never felt like this before, Problem solved you were my answer. Come with me, I wanna show you all of me. Let me be, The part of you that's not complete. The water was so clear, Wished we would never leave there, So open spilled my heart, Your shoulder when I fell apart. Those nights we'd watch the star, And me there in your amrs and, That's where I felt at home, I know that you are the one. Come with me, I wanna show you all of me. Let me be, The part of you that's not complete. I cannot control the way I feel inside, And trusting me i gonna take a long, long time. Not long ago I told you I would die for you, And that's no lie. So come with me, I wanna show you all of me. Let me be, The part of you that's not complete. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this! Sorry have no critique or anything particularly interesting to say, but I really like this  ~Liz. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sorry, I forgot to tick the library box and I tried to do it through editing my reply but it didn't work... "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
lovely and honest! |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
wonderfull poetry i like it the deep feeling |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
this could be a song! A wedding would be a wonderful place for these words! nicely done, I could hear the music! pictureme :-) |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very Lovely! Full of heartfelt truth. Thanks for sharing! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
very expressive and loving -- enjoyed. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Love Angel Junior Member
since 2003-11-04
Posts 25 |
I want to thank you for all your replys and apologize because I haven't replied sooner. My new born has been in the hospital and I have had a lot on my mind. Once again, thank you. This is actually my wedding song because I am getting married in 2 weeks and I wanted to see what other people thought of it because I wrote it for my fiance. LA |
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