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Wings of Fate |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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A sparrow falls, and no one knows Except those held within His hand The demon calls and no one shows Except those sent by his command The darkness reigns and no one cares Except those called to do His will Then buoyed upon the wind by prayers The victim learns to breathe, be still The thunder roars and no one hears Except those captured in His thrall And no one comes to dry those tears Except the one who gave His all The groom returns and no one knows Except for those who watch and wait The world still turns in ebbs and flows But now is left to its own fate The seasons change to bring new life And no one sees except His flock But they have left this world of strife And louder grows the ticking clock Tic TIc TIC TIC! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
It’s never too late! Until your time is up! Great write! Enjoyed the reminder. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know tho.... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm sure hoping it's not too late, Kerthy. Your writing was very good. And, appreciated.  ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As long as there is hope..... This I understand Kethry. Heart Hugs ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A message of faith... a warning written so well... Excellent work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Excellent write my friend. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the edit on this one Keth. It makes it more effective. Excellent, and ominous, and gives me almost a sense of panic. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My heart rate rose as I read along! Very effective writing! ~ Sending lots of loving, healing pink Light to you and your family, Linda |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beloved one Oh my when you write you really write, and this is outstanding, the phrasing, the form and the content are all excellent. What seems to make it even better is the feeling it evokes, only a poet of your quality can direct the reader this way. As I said beloved one it is exquisite writing and I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. and forever Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible format...pulled me right in! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
fantastic writing, I don't know how I missed this. LynneMaree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
I see a succession of films dealing with the theme of life or lack thereof after major disasters, atomic explosions, alien invasions or tidal wave wash out...it points to an obsession on out mortality.. that somehow we know we are dancing with the devil before he's had enough....and in the real world?Good write! Martin |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was extremely well done. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very good write, enjoyed. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kethry...Enjoyed very much. Food for thought Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good write. enjoyed this very much |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, your writing is always excellent... this was no exception. Just beautiful writing. I really liked the effect of the tic tic's. Hugs, Ethel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's a blast from the past! Hello hon it's Isis. Still writing beautifully! Nothing changes around here does it? Much Love Isis *~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~* |
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