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Tock Tock Tock
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Tock Tock Tock You left me with half the clock No energetic Tick, only the Tock Tock Tock That's the instant when it stops Hoping for another second Tock Tock Tock |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very neatly written, I could almost see the clock struggling to complete its circuit. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know this halflife that you've written so beautifully... and that desperate hope. *S* Wonderful work... and it's so good to see you posting again!!! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kazm Cute, enjoyed. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oops, almost missed a Kaz.... Now I'll have to go looking for more. Well done sir! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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