Open Poetry #32 |
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Deep Forest |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA ![]() |
Deep Forest I leave behind blue skies, Sunny meadows, emerald grass, And enter the deep forest, Where the light begins fading fast. 'Tis not a path I chose, But one that I must travel well; For at the end there lies A treasure greater than any wealth. I take a breath and step Beneath the branches of the trees; Steel myself against fear Search for courage in the fallen leaves. Though the thorns and brambles May tear my flesh and make me bleed, I'll walk this path bravely; My spirit, through the darkness, will lead. For once I reach the end I'll find the reason carrying me; My love, hope, and freedom All wait at the end there with Thee. If you would like to check out the song that inspired this, you can find it at http://geokai0.tripod.com I posted it so that it can be enjoyed by others as much as I enjoy it! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. [This message has been edited by TerryW (05-24-2004 03:34 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhTerry~ Getting a preview of this in my mailbox was such a treat ... and finding it here ... even more so~ Your inspiration is beautiful~ I WILL be checking out the web site ... Honest Injun~ Check your email~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes we have to walk the darker path in order to find the light, or love... You took me with you, Terry. Thank you. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Words that inspire and comfort, to be sure! Corinne |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful Terry... Thank you for this. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Thanks so much, everyone! You know how it is when your muse strikes! (In this case, hit me over the head with a frying pan! ![]() ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TerryW -- my son is quite a fan of this music and has introduced me to it -- he has good taste. The poem was mystical and appropro for the times we live in -- I immediately related it to our troops overseas and all the dark forests they now walk. Thanks for the enjoyable read! Don't stay up all night now, ya hear! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely song and words, they work well together... ![]() ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Terry, there was more than your muse working with you on this divine "hymn"! ![]() For the love of God and His angels, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was indeed brilliantly displayed and a wonderful work of art...as reading others thoughts on the purpose and perfection in all things is truly most enlightening. Thank you for sharing, cannot wait to see the web page. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Terry: I am quite liking your style and thoughts... The deep forest an I have a love affair as well. There is no other path more testing, or more beautiful...or more inspiring. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Terry. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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