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This is No Longer a Diversion
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This is No Longer a Diversion |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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This is no longer a pasttime nor a diversion; don't toss me a piece of paper with a pen and a book on "how to" dont pat my head and say "nice poem litle girl" READ my soul...KNOW who i am I AM NOT FOOLING AROUND ABOUT THIS ANYMORE read me or lose me dont ask me what im doing if i go silent upon the glory of the harvest hour, i am not tuning you out merely turning myself on, i lost it too long and slept on a shelf with the shells that became dust magnets READ ME KNOW ME FEEL ME this is no longer a diversion. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You go girl! You sure do tell it like it is Michele. Well done! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay, I believe you (really, really always have and did not believe it was a diversion). I know many spouses (and children, and parents, friends, aunts, uncles, etc...) who just don't get this part of us.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*slowly coming back to sit down in my chair* that yelling part made me jump back a bit...definitely grabbed my attention and stated with force that you are done foolin' around! nice one! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*smile* An individual poem might be fun, to write and/or to read, but POETRY really is blood serious. ...now I will back away slowly until I am out of reach and NOT say anything about this being a nice little poem. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
READ ME KNOW ME FEEL ME Yes, yes! I know this desire. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
You express the sentiments in all our hearts. Great! We all need to be Read Known Felt Way to Go! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
You are too complicated to know, pretty blond poetess! There is too much to see when I look at you and your writing. But I like it and I understand what I can, the rest I just look at and like without understanding. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Telling it like it should be told! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
- some would say ... "if you're finished now, pass me a beer" - "don't let the door bump your bootie" - "do you know who you're talking to?" - "oh baby, I love it when you talk like that" - but me, I'm gonna say . . . I read you and I love every word; I think I know you, but I'm gonna walk easy from here on in; and I feel you honey, way deep inside .... you can remove your hand now... Actually, all kidding aside, I think this is GREAT my friend. Loved the emphasis you put on it. Right on!!! - jwesley |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading; and i am sure most of you DO know this too |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh indeed... Yup I jumped out of my skin too  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Written with much pent up passion |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Strong statements: I never once looked at your poems as anything less than serious writing, allways enjoy them, including this one.. Keep them coming. --------ice ><> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for hearing me |
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