Open Poetry #32 |
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Travel On - Reposted by Request...for Dixie |
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Sunshine
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Travel On _____________________________ One may not reach the dawn save by the path of the night. - Kahlil Gibran - _____________________________ You cannot see the light my dear until the dark has made you fear until the day is so far away you cannot see the light. Until the dark has made you fear until the day is so far away you cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear. Until the day is so far away you cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near You cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near save by the path of the night. Until a voice in the dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near save by the path of the night ~ when wrong is suddenly made right And now you've reached the dawn. ~*~ Thank you, Dixie. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, this was such a sweet post for Dixie, and so true! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this is so inspirational Karilea.. I am sure Dixie will love it! Hugs~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I went back to read this again. The structure of the poem is very intentional -- I'm wondering if there is a name for that form??? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Karilea, thank you for reposting this...I was in those archives again and I was totally swept away by this one when I came across it!!! amazing talent and passion...and outlook you have on life! Thank you for sharing that here! ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
![]() come'on people...read this! |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
And now you've reached the dawn. i like it |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you for reposting Karilea, Thank you for requesting it Dixie... I don't know how I missed this beautiful and inspirational write. keeping it. Maree ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is wonderful and i hope dixie was touched by it again as im sure she was |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*library click* |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
sure am glad Dixie requested this; it is a pleasure to read it. Neat repetitive rhyme pattern and lots of wisdom. I think I'm going to be repeating this one on my long drive home! Sadie |
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