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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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At a moments notice, if not this second eyelids press shut to reopen, one reckons one is called,at the snap of a finger an ominous tick that doesn't linger... life spans each moment, as one inspires then accounts settle as the best retires; a simple gesture or movement in high grasses translates to unknown measures for the masses, In this life now and then the next second pauses describe time's context, a cause is set to face hardy reactions minute unit of time know distractions. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Martin A very thought provoking piece of writing. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In this life now and then the next second pauses describe time's context, ~*~ I read this two ways... but I would not be surprised if you knew that already |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Martin... I shall keep this to ponder later. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"a simple gesture or movement in high grasses translates to unknown measures for the masses," Martin, so true. Enjoyed this writing tonight.  .......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your writings |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Appreciate your comments, this is a time series poem! |
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