you spoke to me last night...

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Open Poetry #32

you spoke to me last night...

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-21 07:14 PM

you spoke to me last night
you told me that your mine
and i'm yours
you said the world would stop
if we weren't together

you spoke to me last night
you told me that you loved
every little peice of me
you said the world would stop
if we weren't together

you spoke to me last night
and promised me the moon and the stars
you promised me your heart
you said the world would stop
if we weren't together

you're wrong
the world won't stop,
my heart will..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-05-21 07:33 PM

What passion contained in this.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-21 07:37 PM

"you spoke to me last night
and promised me the moon and the stars
you promised me your heart
you said the world would stop
if we weren't together

you're wrong
the world won't stop,
my heart will.."

Extremely well done and deeply felt.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2004-05-21 07:39 PM

"you're wrong
the world won't stop,
my heart will.."

WOW! That has been echoed across the globe millions of times, by millions of hearts I bet!

Wonderful work

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