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Open Poetry #32

Oasis Calls . . . . . .Senryu

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2004-05-21 03:09 PM

Green palms drinking in
sunset’s orange over blue....
Oasis calls me.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-05-21 03:13 PM

I picture this well! Good one. Have a great day, RatL.
Sadie

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2004-05-21 03:17 PM

Ed

This sounds like the view out my front window any sunset.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-05-21 03:19 PM

it must sound nice

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-05-21 04:22 PM

yes it sounds like paradise, very nice

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-05-21 04:25 PM

Picturesque! Good one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-05-21 04:48 PM

You've made work vanish and a dreary cubicle just melt away... I feel as if I'm there. *S* Incredibly beautiful... yes!! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-05-21 06:42 PM

Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-05-21 10:12 PM

Orange...oh ranghe...

Yes, I can see this...

unfortunately, my orange was oranje
so it collided at first...

I just had to adopt
a different accent....

hope you don't mind
that I answered a bit late.

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