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0 posted 2004-05-21 03:09 PM


Green palms drinking in
sunset’s orange over blue....
Oasis calls me.

© Copyright 2004 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-21 03:13 PM


I picture this well!  Good one.  Have a great day, RatL.
      Sadie

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2 posted 2004-05-21 03:17 PM


Ed

This sounds like the view out my front window any sunset.  

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3 posted 2004-05-21 03:19 PM


it must sound nice
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4 posted 2004-05-21 04:22 PM


yes it sounds like paradise, very nice
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5 posted 2004-05-21 04:25 PM


Picturesque!  Good one!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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6 posted 2004-05-21 04:48 PM


You've made work vanish and a dreary cubicle just melt away... I feel as if I'm there. *S* Incredibly beautiful... yes!! *S*
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7 posted 2004-05-21 06:42 PM


Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2004-05-21 10:12 PM


Orange...oh ranghe...

Yes, I can see this...

unfortunately, my orange was oranje
so it collided at first...

I just had to adopt
a different accent....

hope you don't mind
that I answered a bit late.

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