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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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It was a Kodak moment for your picture perfect face. One of those star light, hold me tight, kind of times... And I fold you in my pocket between a couple Fives. Just so, when I need to, I can look into your eyes. Those picture perfect eyes... You always smelled of musk and something, just enough, to make the depth of me fall deep, so deep in need of you. And here I am, a storm again, imagining your smile, again. I'm lost and I'm alone again... I only wish you cared. He was a man of sorrows |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Alyssa, this is a very charming write. Perfectly done. Wishing you that he WILL care ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And here I am, a storm again, imagining your smile, again. I'm lost and I'm alone again... I only wish you cared. Sweet Alyssa, maybe they care, but don't know how to show that they do? Good writing, sweet friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Alyssa, I really enjoyed this poem.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes I think we should smash the camera on the ground and never look back  loveya |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Margherita, Thank you ..Perfectly done? woah, not quite sure on that, but very kind of you to say! Hugs to you...Ethel, well, this was written about someone I chose to fall in love with (not a common thing for me, he's the only one I've ever let myself fall in love with). Once he realised that I wasn't into childish dating and that my intentions for courting him were to scan him for marriage, he ran (broke up with me via email and shut off all contact with me). Anyway, guess that isn't unexpected... I just thought more of him. And the problem with me falling in love, is that I stay in love, forever... and forever I mourn the loss of them. But I know he doesn't care... whew, really didn't mean to get into all of that. I just miss him, still. thanks for your reply Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. [This message has been edited by GG (04-18-2004 04:07 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Grover, thank you I'm glad you did...Dixie, probably a good idea... wish I could harden my heart just enough to do that, I really do *sigh* thanks for your words Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...how many times have I only wished she cared...James |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
James, thanks for your reply ..and, yeah, I imagine we all wish that too many times....Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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