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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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In the dead of the night The voices within Continue to scream in my mind Incredibly confused And not understanding No pity from them will I find They tell me things And control my thoughts I lose all self-control Trying to sleep As my thoughts start to wander My mind begins to slow Beads of sweat Flow down my brow As my head caves slowly in My eye's closed tight Hands over my ears As the voices slowly win Better to die, and sleep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...that sounds scary |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
wow trev , I hope you hear much softer whispers ahead ... by the way I am north of the river Hope |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
The contrasting moods of your PIP picture and poem made a first read impossible to grasp. I couldn't stop laughing at your expression. However, after several reads, I have to say this is one of the best poems I've ever read.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nah they dont win....just get the upper hand every now and again...you are good my friend |
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