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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2004-05-21 11:01 AM


My screensaver was a beautiful gazebo with flowers flowing in all directions. This is how this one came to mind.
Enjoy.
Hugs BonBon


Lovers Lane

Smell the aroma of honeysuckle and magnolia.
Hear the call of an exotic bird.
Gaze into the mist that separates into
enchanted webs of beauty and fun filled fantasy.
Ahead an arch of white looms in misty shadows of
mystery.
You step over the threshold, vibrant colors assail
your sensitive senses.
Colors of passionate red, tranquil blue, vibrant
yellow,
and seductive lace patterns of black.
In the center, a gazebo of white, covered with the
flower of the clematis in shades of purple and
delicate white.
You stand enthralled by this exquisite beauty.
Words frozen upon your trembling lips.
Then he takes your hand and says in a deep mellow
tone.
Come walk with me.
Share this wondrous walk in this tranquil garden.
Breathe in the beauty.
Let my love surround you.
Come my beauty.
Let us wonder down the path
called
Lovers Lane.

© Copyright 2004 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-21 11:32 AM


Yes! Okeydokey! NOW! *S*

Beautiful write, dear lady! *S*

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-21 12:23 PM


very pretty
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2004-05-21 02:51 PM


lovely thoughts and words expressed pampering all who read.
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-05-21 04:53 PM


You do write some wonderful poetry Bonnie J.
Enjoyed the read.
JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-05-21 04:57 PM


Perfectly beautiful Bonnie!
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-05-23 01:06 AM


Nice...James
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