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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia 
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Trans-cend She enters the room, the light flickers to life, starts the water running… Staring into the mirror remembering moments just gone when she allowed inhibition to slip and music fill the soul moving rhythmically, just part of the crowd then, the slipping back into now wash off the mask of acceptance, look into the mirror seeing the shy remains of dignity draining into the swirl of water disappearing down the sink… turn off the water turn out the lights nothing left to feel here ~he exits~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
wash off the mask of acceptance, look into the mirror seeing the shy remains of dignity draining into the swirl of water disappearing down the sink… Interesting imagary. I really like this. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Lina, Im more than proud of you...this is a secret place you are displaying here and that is a brave thing to do.  ...im just going to put a plug in for your website....i think our friends here would understand this poem better that way. good work buddy  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a touching piece |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lina, this is a great poem..and the imagery terrific, I could hear the tap sqeaking on and the water running, and I can see it swirling down into the pipes...and the water? yes, it had much clarity. Most Enjoyed, really very touching. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Thank you all for replying to this post i wasn't sure the topic would go well. Next one should be better. (i hope  ) |
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