Spillage Of The Donut Dilemma (Dedication)

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-20 03:57 PM

The cosmic sun elates a brightened day
That brought the introduction of daydreams at play
Sent surfing on a donut hole that rambled ‘cross the floor
And landed in a saucer filled with milk so full did pour
Pour and pour some more
And puddles formed the floor
Like cloud pictures gathered splash in moist detour
The mop and bucket, rickety racket ship to shore
And sloshed along the tiles, forty winks and smiles
Milk was spilt for miles across miles
And not a drop was wasted donuts basted sponge
Sopping up the milk and rolling, rolling in the plunge
Of saucers set as kitty coffers
Grey and stealth the little elf set prey upon yon round
And crept without a sound upon the puddles wet
And suddenly surprised, I’ll bet
The wolf
No makeup or hooded charm, not a kitty to disarm
Just mop and glow, just stop and go
And what a trade of smiles wiles when that milk did flow
So there Mon Frair and not a drop to drink

Copyright Kkh 5/20/04

Dedicated to the good humor of one RavenWolfVoyager
Where ever you are...

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

1 posted 2004-05-20 04:27 PM

haha.. wow. What a web of words. And pictures. What a scene! This was great.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-20 04:34 PM

This is so cute...
and no need to cry over spilled milk.

Loved it Kathleen.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

3 posted 2004-05-20 04:36 PM

This Diamond,
How elastic, and, entertaining!
Doc

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-05-20 05:20 PM

TD

A bit different for you...enjoyed a great deal...much fun to read!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-05-20 05:42 PM

What a wit! And, what a delightful piece of writing, TD.

.....jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-05-20 08:32 PM

Tee Hee -- Fun.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-05-20 10:33 PM

and now for something compltely different
i like......
yea where is that man?

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2004-05-20 10:52 PM

Yes...that fellow is even rarer than I am these days....maybe I will give him a jingle....him and Kaz both, I would like to see more of around here.

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Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-05-20 11:53 PM

TD,
Cute and expertly written. You're too much! Enjoyed to the max!
Sadie

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-05-21 02:51 AM

very clever!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-05-21 11:12 AM

A delightful read... for one who is much missed!!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

12 posted 2004-05-21 12:30 PM

so playful

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-05-21 02:50 PM

so much fun reading, incredible wordplay...was a lot of fun and glowing with rhyme. I liked a lot

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

14 posted 2004-05-21 04:56 PM

TOO Silly, but so nice!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

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