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Angry One
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Angry animal at only ten with carrot mane in string it hangs beside a deceptive smile. Wild cat distracted by any sound Ready to strike, ready to pound especially at the silence of pendulums swing. Angry One, from where did you come? [This message has been edited by Sadelite (05-20-2004 12:39 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I need help with this one...  'Splain! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'll e-mail later. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I envision the wild hearted steed...skiddish and independent... I would name him skyrocket  Enjoyed your journey here TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"At only ten ..." ? So it can't be a hissing puma! You mysterious lady, you keep us thinking ... A captivating read. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I could see me here |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay, who is the angry one. It sounds like a puma to me, too, but like above, "only 10" throws me. .....jo |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Deer eyes at eight Can patiently wait Watching the cat try to swing Curly lock top All motions stop Listen to the bell now ring Tom cat she doesn’t know But play’s done and must go Glancing over shoulder sees Quickly the angry flees Gloom perhaps not the answer but at least a response of sorts |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
I got the picture of when I used to tease my cat. With the ball on a string. Or anything... Very descriptive though. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful! Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, TD, and Margherita, Thank you for responding. It's funny how a poet can write something that he thinks is clear as clean water, and when he hears of other's interpretation, he has to go back and say, "Hm... I didn't think of it that way, but that's an interesting take on the theme!" I find myself smiling at all the ways this poem has been visualized. Thank you for your feedback! Sadie passing shadows, Ohhhhh. That ouches. Be well, my friend. Sadie iliana, You'll kick yourself when you figure it out! You're trying too hard. Gotta get back to business very soon. Thanks, Sadie Professor, I think the Angry One has dwelled in the setting of many of your gloomier poems. Thanks. Sadie endlessecho, You must have one playful and aggressive little kitty! Enjoyed your response. Sadie Thanks, Eric. I appreciate your response. Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (05-20-2004 03:08 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay -- I give up? Please email me to let me know? The only other thing I could figure was a decorative grandfather clock or a kitty watching it! lol [This message has been edited by iliana (05-21-2004 11:05 AM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, Thanks for sharing your inquisitive mind. I'd be happy to e-mail. Take care Sadie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've read my e-mail. You are doing all you can, and that sort of carrying DOES have weight and merit. You may not see it yourself, but it will continue to be felt by those who receive your gifts. I am very proud of you - and someday, you will see just how much of a change you made. Thank you for sharing the details.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I pictured a young two-legged even more than a four-legged creature. Having had three brothers and sisters with red hair, and having worked with children in a psychiatric setting...I guess understood this write differently than most the other readers.  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, You are a real pal! Thanks for the pat on the shoulder. I needed that. Your words are very much appreciated. Sadie Midnitesun, Although in different settings, there is unrest... Thanks so much for responding. I've missed your writing. Sadie |
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