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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-19 07:54 PM

Together, today
You and I
Sitting a talking
As time slips by

You laugh, I smile
You pause in thought
I watch and wonder
My attention caught

Such a simple thing
This precious time
Held in a moment’s breath
Caught within the sublime

Such a fragile gift
This gentle pleasure
Of our simply being
You and I together

But time moves along
And our paths soon depart
Leaving only brief remembrance
Of our meeting hearts

Then I’ll count the seconds
That drag as years
Until again time passes
And you reappear

For when our paths cross
As they are often wont to do
I’ll tarry in that moment
My precious time with you

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-05-19 08:23 PM

I have one that I spend precious time with...James

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

2 posted 2004-05-19 08:48 PM

Great right. I know the feeling. Nice job.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-05-19 09:23 PM

its amazing how we can make a moments bliss last lifetimes

this was lovely

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-20 12:16 PM

Thank you for your kind comments. If only we could choose how fast time passes, to be able to linger in a moment a bit longer . . .

Susan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-20 12:52 PM

I feel this one so deeply...and I understand the emotion here

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-05-20 01:18 PM

Beauty lives in the heart of this gentle poem.

Great write!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

7 posted 2004-05-20 01:32 PM

"Such a simple thing
This precious time"

I couldn't agree more. Beautiful poem!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-05-20 01:37 PM

Lovely poem..
I often have moments where I want time to stand still....
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

9 posted 2004-05-20 04:58 PM

great poem you nailed the feelings im feeling right now on the head.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-05-20 05:02 PM

Absolutely beautiful creation of your heart.

Such a fragile gift
This gentle pleasure
Of our simply being
You and I together

Yes, in simply BEING there is such bliss!

Love, Margherita

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

11 posted 2004-05-20 07:39 PM

You know Susan, sometimes when we say goodbye to a friend, it may be decades before we say hello again.

Robert

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2004-05-20 10:32 PM

I'm convinced that time really does vary, and sometimes those seconds....won't....tick....by. You are all too right with this one.

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