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Open Poetry #32

cock-a-doodle-noon

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2004-05-19 02:45 AM

a little bit of comfort there
a word to pad this crook of neck
might have made a difference...
perhaps
I might have slept

Not a beggared parentage
shush now don't say "I was wrong"
a little bit of comfort there?
perhaps
I've slept too long.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-19 02:58 AM

Karen -- sounds like a rough night. Enjoyed the poem. Perhaps it's not too late.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-05-19 03:14 AM

Huggy-wuggies

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-05-19 09:02 AM

I know these nights of days...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-05-19 09:02 AM

Vicious cycle....

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-19 09:17 AM

Karen?

C'mere....

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-05-19 10:43 AM

Poignant and strong....these ins and outs...
You share this beautifully Thank you ~P

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-05-19 12:51 PM

yep...you rub off on me

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-05-19 12:55 PM

serenity,
Perhaps,

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