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The Knowing Of
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The Knowing Of |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Knowing Of I can't make it out the handwriting on the wall unrecognizable, each scrawl Those days have come and gone yet I am invaded by thought... what happens now, after then who will I call when I am the only one left behind who will I confide in reflect with, explain my movements to who will see my progress and cheer me on I searched for a four leaf clover yesterday, but only found weeds among the blossoms filling in the gaps not unlike my daily trials of broken promises, of silent need. I wander my words this morning, disorganized from sleep loss dreams not forthcoming, eyes tired and dazed by the mist that veils. I miss the little things that made me reach for ribbons to tie up my hair, to brighten my face allowing eyes to shine and lips to curve upward, dimples to show... I miss the morning good-byes, the I'll-return-kisses the knowing of later and the looking forward of. I search my mind for the last of words, those of endearment that have escaped usage as I close my eyes, begin this day and fall back in time. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lovely poem, though sad...I wish we could take all those times, and roll them up into a little reminder blanket, reminding us, to savor each moment, as if it were the best ever. Love to you, Lee J. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
weeds among the blossoms, loved those lines........... yes to the weeds set them free rejoice with them be one with them and dance freely my friend |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed this Has a transitional feel about the writing And keep the ribbons Gloom |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wishing I could send you heaps of four leaf clovers Maureen , always remember as we rid the weeds , we plant new seeds Hope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Each write expressive of such rich treasure TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful emotion in this write. Enjoyed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I too wish I could send you four leaf clovers dear Maureen. Can I send you cyber hugs instead?  Soon...soon you will tie up your hair with those ribbons and smile again.. Heart Hugs, Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always make me think about feelings I have had |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMyFriend~ 'I miss the little things that made me reach for ribbons to tie up my hair, to brighten my face allowing eyes to shine and lips to curve upward, dimples to show... I miss the morning good-byes, the I'll-return-kisses the knowing of later and the looking forward of. I search my mind for the last of words, those of endearment that have escaped usage as I close my eyes, begin this day and fall back in time.' You've touch on some very tender thoughts here, dear lady~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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