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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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friction makes me sing high tension wire sing it slowly ever so takes away every day it does but that's how you make a song |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Brian I think you're right...that, and other things! Love your poetry. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
tonight I wish I could just hum a few bars... sigh? sigh.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
then a few bars... will behum--- a Songus! smile thank you Martie... and thank you... Aiwe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the way you look at things  most enjoyed Brian. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I've often marveled at the "construct" of your writings..and now wonder if doing this... friction makes me sing high tension wire sing it slowly ever so takes away every day it does but that's how you make a song ...changes the meaning enough NOT to be plagerism? hehehe I like this little ditty dude. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Repeating wranx just enough to say... I like this little dittie, dude.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There's an echo in here...and it is just as good each time around. TD |
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