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Open Poetry #32

The Soul Traveler

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-05-17 08:59 PM

the gleam in your eyes
the soft touch of your
hands. the things you
been through and done
has only just begun.

Special as you are
you make me feel like
a star. the color scheme
of your ivory skin with
everything to bare and more
this is just the begining
of the exploration.

the genuine smile
upon your face
the laugh the dimples
on your body. that
hyponitize me for hrs.

I sit here and sulk
untill I see you again
only wanting you more
and more over and over
again.

The stars shine bright
as my heart expands the
one of a kind gentelmen
of the past and the new
presence engulfs me into
beliving I can whole
heartling love again.

unedited what do you all think?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-05-17 10:45 PM

Nice! Loved the words. This was musical.
Sadie

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-05-18 01:13 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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