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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-05-17 05:19 PM



That Voice

I read with "no intent"
my stomach growling in hunger,
the aim of my yesterday
lost in the meaningless of
those emotions that were held in check.

I ascend the day in promise,
often failing, but continuing on,
always waiting for that one opening
of understanding.

I should let go, of what I am not sure.
But found in opportunity
is better than lost in love.

Still, I listen for that voice.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-17 06:30 PM


hmmm ... the inner voice is reliable usually ...

But it feels so good to be lost in love!

Nice write, Maureen.
Love, Margherita


Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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2 posted 2004-05-17 06:56 PM


But found in opportunity
is better than lost in love.

But still we can't help but listen for those voices, can we?

Enjoyed this very much.
          Sadie

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-05-17 10:58 PM


"But found in opportunity
is better than lost in love"

WOW!! well...damn that says it all  

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
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Ohio, USA
4 posted 2004-05-17 11:23 PM


naked thoughts,
impressive write. I had to reread
this a few times and than just breathe.
awesome finish!
thanks for sharing this.
pictureme :-)

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-18 04:07 AM


love this thought
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-21 12:19 PM


Me too...and sometimes I hear it...James
iliana
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7 posted 2004-05-23 02:52 AM


I like your attitude, M.  Good lines!
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