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That Voice
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That Voice |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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That Voice I read with "no intent" my stomach growling in hunger, the aim of my yesterday lost in the meaningless of those emotions that were held in check. I ascend the day in promise, often failing, but continuing on, always waiting for that one opening of understanding. I should let go, of what I am not sure. But found in opportunity is better than lost in love. Still, I listen for that voice. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmm ... the inner voice is reliable usually ... But it feels so good to be lost in love! Nice write, Maureen. Love, Margherita  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
But found in opportunity is better than lost in love. But still we can't help but listen for those voices, can we? Enjoyed this very much. Sadie |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"But found in opportunity is better than lost in love" WOW!! well...damn that says it all  |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
naked thoughts, impressive write. I had to reread this a few times and than just breathe. awesome finish! thanks for sharing this. pictureme :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this thought |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...and sometimes I hear it...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like your attitude, M. Good lines! |
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