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The burn of you
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The burn of you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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You speak to me With your silver tongue Gilded words slipping From your parted lips The sound of your voice Weaves enchantment about me Transforming my soul To a glistening pool The echo of your dulcet tones Ring as a symphony Shattering the very heart of me Into splinters of desire Whisper to me of your inner fire Your worded embers branding me As your spoken flame consumes me Into your lover's pyre I am but ashes beneath your touch. S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whewwww! If this doesn't say it all, nothing does...Nice! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I am but ashes beneath your touch What an image! fantastico. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Wow! Nice writing! Sadie |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yep, its awesome you always are |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent Susan TD |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Susan, very nice write...I thought the last line was awesome and said it all.... I am but ashes beneath your touch! sensually beautiful. pictureme :-) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ Knew from the title that it would be a *sigh* maker~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Whisper to me of your inner fire Your worded embers branding me As your spoken flame consumes me Into your lover's pyre I am but ashes beneath your touch." Great writing! ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I too love that last line |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks. I do so appreciate you all. Smiles -- Susan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...revisiting...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
That's really a good thought. |
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