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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-05-17 09:20 AM

The trees
can only sigh;

some days,

upon receipt of
these endless wishes,
doubts and longings
i pin on thier
overburdened shoulders,

is it mere coincidence
as i project
thru windowed eyes,
that they seem to take flight,
just at the right time, breaking
the chains of selfabsorption
that press upon me,

as they offer
merely a moment
outside of myself,
leaving me
to sit mesmerized,
upon inhalation of
their collective sigh.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-18-2004 07:31 PM).]

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

1 posted 2004-05-17 10:03 AM

Is it your soft sigh,
or the wind in the leaves?
If only for the moment-
this reverie is broken
sweet respite from these longings.

~P

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-05-17 10:04 AM

awesome

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-05-17 10:11 AM

inkedgoddess
A good discription, enjoyed.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-17 10:15 AM

Very nice -- sigh.

Susan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-17 12:31 PM

such feeling
such passion in you

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-05-17 02:22 PM

Another WOW! This is really nice to read.
Great poem.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-05-17 05:55 PM

Absolutely lovely Inked.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-05-17 09:07 PM

as they offer
merely a moment
outside of myself,
leaving me
to sit mesmerized,
upon inhalation of
their collective sigh

Wonderful description! I love it!
Sadie

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2004-05-17 10:18 PM

People can sigh too!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-05-17 10:27 PM

thanks for stopping by

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

11 posted 2004-05-17 10:50 PM

..mmm...yes, ive enjoyed this!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-05-18 01:31 AM

Very beautiful moment of reality here -- a place I'd like to be for a moment, too!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2004-05-18 01:41 AM

A lovely thought...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2004-05-18 05:23 PM

quote:
leaving me
to sit mesmerized,
upon inhalation of
their collective sigh.

... I join in this choir of sighs .... for you have shared rare beauty.

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2004-05-18 05:32 PM

Beautiful beautiful...
~Sighs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

16 posted 2004-05-18 05:42 PM

Good...very very good.

This is poetry.

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