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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 it's hard to explain this feeling i feel it's from deep within and it's very real there is some tingling in my fingers as the memory of your touch softly lingers in my stomach feels like butterflies are flying my heart racing even though our love is dying my love is as strong as ever i have never felt this way for another, no way never i have a tear in my eye yet, i won't allow myself to cry i long for your body to lay next to mine i feel excited remembering how it was,back in time your eyes never left my face you knew where to touch and make my heart race you always aid i was georgous and how you loved me then something happened now you refuse to see i long to feel you deep inside where we shared that love a feeling so good,one couldn't hide i miss your smile once only ment for me i miss your touch loving,gentle, felt for eternity i wish there was a way to open your door so we could feel exctasy, just once more a feeling of love i so ever miss just like the passionate way you use to kiss i love you dale with all my heart i always have but now we must part
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 the pain and longing will eventually wane...but until then just know that the world is out there waiting for you...  seperation is never easy, but it certainly builds character and you discover strengths you never knew you had...be well |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Heartaches are the ultimate devastation. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Why must you part...James |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Awh...so much emotion spilling out in your words...I hope it feels better to be able to share~ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
could feel the emotion in this, my friend...more power to you... jwesley |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank all of you for your replies and support
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
MCGROVES, I seen and felt the butterflys, bitterly sweet! pictureme :-) |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, this poem really touched my heart. I could feel the pain in it. I jhope that things will be better real soon. Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is as heartwrenching as a very melancholic sunset. Another sun will warm your heart again, trust. Love and light. Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautifully penned yet sad write. Well done. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a thankyou from my heart 
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful poetry! JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Riding to the top on a river of blue...James |
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