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GlisteningRain
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The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-16 11:47 PM



I reminisce a memory I made. A love that never was; in haze. Captured every emotion almost..except the galaxy in my palm..just one of many in my heart...removed. The pain that soothes my nothingness, Aching my everything..my memory.

© Copyright 2004 Byron Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-17 12:45 PM


Lovely writing, GlisteningRain.  
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2 posted 2004-05-17 03:32 AM


I love this format! an astounding piece!
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3 posted 2004-05-17 04:29 AM


Beautiful.
Suetang
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4 posted 2004-05-17 06:07 PM


Hello Byron

I am so very humbled that my words inspired you so much.  You certainly have a way with words.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2004-05-17 08:50 PM


Glistening Rain,
   You captured the galaxy in your poem...
  Enjoyed!
             Sadie

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6 posted 2004-05-17 10:57 PM


sweet
iliana
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7 posted 2004-05-31 03:35 AM


This was one gorgeous piece of writing -- flowed like silk in the wind!
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