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Open Poetry #32

Inspired by suetange

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-16 11:47 PM

I reminisce a memory I made. A love that never was; in haze. Captured every emotion almost..except the galaxy in my palm..just one of many in my heart...removed. The pain that soothes my nothingness, Aching my everything..my memory.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-17 12:45 PM

Lovely writing, GlisteningRain.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-05-17 03:32 AM

I love this format! an astounding piece!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2004-05-17 04:29 AM

Beautiful.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2004-05-17 06:07 PM

Hello Byron

I am so very humbled that my words inspired you so much. You certainly have a way with words.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-05-17 08:50 PM

Glistening Rain,
   You captured the galaxy in your poem...
  Enjoyed!
             Sadie

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-05-17 10:57 PM

sweet

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-05-31 03:35 AM

This was one gorgeous piece of writing -- flowed like silk in the wind!

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