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Open Poetry #32

Time Warp

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-05-16 02:25 PM

Time warp

The turning wheel of time
Has carried me into a lucid dream
In which I guide what happens
Things only I can see
I see a solitary life
One that was chosen
Not one that was destined to be

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-05-16 02:33 PM

choice, is a gift...even if the choice to be made is a difficult one.

this is good

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-05-16 02:38 PM

choice or fate? I wonder sometimes how life is lived. Maybe a bit of both?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-05-16 02:49 PM

Simplicity is vivid and choice is consoling.
The arms of eternal love surround such things.
Great write.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-16 04:10 PM

I'm not sure what to think, in a way it makes me feel a little sad. Solitude, though precious in its moments, would grow too heavily about me. Interesting and thought provoking write.

Susan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-05-17 05:39 PM

So glad you joined us here Paz...
I always read your words many times...because the intensity of
the topic holds velocity...
I understand the choice...and can think of only one good reason.
Think on it

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