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Love Anew (Duet With Magnus)
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Love Anew (Duet With Magnus) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Much thanks to my cohert in poetry, Magnus, for awakening my sleeping muse  Love Anew If love were left to find a heart Upon the steps of mountains high Two hands would clasp, pull not apart As eagles flew in soaring sky And if love lingered, stilling time As hands enclasped beneath the moon Could poets ever pen such lines To cause these lovers hearts to swoon For in their hearts a promise lay To love and cherish for all time A couples vow their words would say From written script of lover's rhyme He swore to her his love was true She swore she'd never leave his side In wedding white, borrowed, and blue She vowed that she would be his bride A blush did show as hearts did race Upon the night when they were wed When two loves joined in one embrace Beneath the stars above their heads 'Twas on that night, the comets rained And as the stars fell to the earth He kissed her face where veil did train And heavens sighed at loves rebirth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For in their hearts a promise lay To love and cherish for all time A couples vow their words would say From written script of lover's rhyme He swore to her his love was true She swore she'd never leave his side In wedding white, borrowed, and blue She vowed that she would be his bride ~*~ Ah, Ruth...you did indeed find a true poet with whom to mix your muse... Magnus...you could not have requested the assistance of a better poet, than our Ruth, to write such a love poem. Thank you both for leaving us all such a treasure. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava!! A wonderful duet by two of Passions finest. Wonderful you two...congrats on a beautiful piece of work. Please du-et again soon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well mercy sakes, was that a beauty you two. What a fantastic duo you make, so would it be asking too much for another? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth and Barry.........lovely with goosebumps included.  two of them!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! I love this! Incredible! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nice work you two - I especially like: "And if love lingered, stilling time As hands enclasped beneath the moon Could poets ever pen such lines To cause these lovers hearts to swoon " |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ahhhh beautiful...absolutely wonderful both of you. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ruth...I must say your muse is alive and well. Ready to perform all poetic tasks. Thanx for the game of "poetry tag"... was fun. You rhyme magnificently!! Thanx all for your comments. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone for the comments and Barry, thank you for taking the time to write with me , it was my pleasure |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is a pinnacle in poetry, where it is obvious that the gifts have matured and render excellence, seamless, flowing and beautiful you two. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice duet...James |
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