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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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 I was inspired by a loss of words, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Incredible Dawn.... "standing on moment's edge, balancing silence on tip of tongue" Gawd this is so good...so very very good. Hugs sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, that is just what we do... hold on too long. Beautiful work, Dawn. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite write. Love and light. Margherita  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Such fragile beauty. Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'll have to agree with everyone above. A stellar write! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful poetry Dawn~ You speak softly to this heart of mine, and I felt you here~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
indeed a stellar write, I agree with Wranx.  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
 Loved this one buddyyou keep coming up with the ideal image to accompany the words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
most of us do just beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dawn your expressions are lovely... wistful and delicate... beautiful poetry girlie!!  I love you more the further I go ... |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
would have sworn i had commented on this already, but then you already knew i loved it... didn't you? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beatuifully expressed Dawn ... yes holding on too long , I know all about this Hope |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Absolute beauty in this write. Enjoyed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This must be my day for reading lovely poems. Another delicate treasure. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This leaves me muted. All I can say is, hugs to you, sweet one. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Few poems say so much in such few words. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us! |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
"standing on moment's edge, balancing silence on tip of tongue" I have to agree with Enchantress on these lines absolutely brilliant... I'm willing to go as far as genius "And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh my, so delicate and poignant at the same time. ....through these eyes, you are noticed, so very noticed. Your impact is soft yet deep.... ~P |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh you know i had to come in and give a hug thanks you gorgeous poet creatures  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I often pass by poetry with graphic art behind it. I'm glad I didn't this time, because this is art with graphic art behind it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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