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Tête-à-têtes
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Tête-à-têtes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Tête-à-têtes Splintered facets keeping a soul together... It was just a conversation of slivered roles in life of why truths are kept hidden, so pain seems minimal, until the end… layered considerations of why some events are executed to keep a soul intact… but what mattered, mostly, was her tacit understanding; no need to talk, really, no need. Which is why rose emotion blushed full pink, full closure in throat knowing intimacy, and why vast miles withered, by stretch of love, and you seemed only but an embrace away. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 so well written...so deeply touching...made me cry...but with a smile in my heart. to have the gift you have, to move a person to tears so easily...i admire your ability ms. sunshine  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good poem..well written K.. thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
felt deeply here too; just the way it was set up and the flow of it, very naturally off the pen to the reader's inside |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea and you seemed only but an embrace away.  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Nicely done. KJ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..very gently expressed. Hugs sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching...softly touching |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree very nice poetry! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A layered message in an electronic bottle being sent to someone across miles, I suspect. A friend, an old friend, perhaps? This is very mysterious, this! Corinne |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beuatifully written and understood... May this grace be a compliment to you forever, the understanding in you. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
As always, simply beautiful. Smiles -- Susan |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a meeting is surely to be treasured...I've had few and blundered away most of them. Still, I do see at least one face that matches these words, and others that might match if only my vision were clearer. As you always do, you've caught the critical moment and made it real. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Extraordinary beauty! .... and I relate. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful, simply elegant and touching....tis soul refreshing....sigh...and I needed that |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*OH MY GOSH* This is real. And, really good! ....jo |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
this was interesting. the poem tell us what the tete a tete did but does not expose it. it was almost like you were teasing us - making us feel as if we got it all when we only got one narrow view. -majnu |
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