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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Night Enwrapped within the silent night The velvet black the stars of bright Resting in each seethe of sheathe That played upon my breath of breathe. Standing quiet as the trees Listening movements of the leaves Dancing with a swish and sway Within the velvet black array And I began to move like wheat To the rhythm of the beat Swaying in hypnotic sway The melody my mind did play And in that moment of the dun I became as one on one In the package of a thought In a magic web of wrought It is these remnants of my way That ease surcease into my day |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, This was great, but it just kept getting better and better. I always read yours aloud. The sound and flow is so beautiful! Enwrapped within the silent night The velvet black the stars of bright Resting in each seethe of sheathe That played upon my breath of breathe Sadie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "And I began to move like wheat To the rhythm of the beat Swaying in hypnotic sway The melody my mind did play" I know this...how it feels...thank you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Sy.. so pleased to read you in the evening as well. Nite Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And I began to move like wheat To the rhythm of the beat Swaying in hypnotic sway The melody my mind did play i do this too, to the tall weeds along the highway that sway in the summerbreeze so nice of you to pay tribute to them |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'll go along with the good folks above. Stellar, m'friend |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh, I can start and end my day reading your awesome words dear Seymour. Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a melody of rapture. Every day should begin thus. TD |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I began to move like wheat To the rhythm of the beat Swaying in hypnotic sway The melody my mind did play ============================== and I'd pay money to see it!! LOL  Must be spring fever...Randy was dancing today too. Very cool write Sybabers...cadence cool wrapped in rhyme...love the images of this...and of course your word play.. Resting in each seethe of sheathe That played upon my breath of breathe. YOU daPoet man.  *ww*    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Standing quiet as the trees Listening movements of the leaves" ~ I find such peace in these words ~ and enjoy the visual as well! Goodnight, Sir T! EA |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice.. think this may be my favourite of yours now  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I see you're at it again even at night |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, I am beginning to believe you think in poetry! What a lullaby! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They are right...your heart pumps poems... and you rarely post at night... what a treasure to find, so early in the a.m....  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful words flowing from your pen, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite A happy comment, thank you. Martie, Thank you dear, hugs Nancy, Night hugs yummy yummy. Chris, You are a sweetheart. TD, Try and it may be so. JM, And you da poetess. WWRS EA, Good morning sweet, muted And you are a favorite with me. passing, Even at night. iliana, Did it put you to sleep. LOL Sunshine, You are the treasure, hugs. scorpio, Thank you my friend. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I enjoyed this. :-) ~Laura~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Laura, Thank you Laura. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Absolutely wonderful write. Way to go Seymour Tabin! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
incredible dear friend, hiya and good morning right back atcha |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thank you so much. LeeJ incredible sounds good to me, LOL |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
i enjoyed this very much. thank you for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tequilia, Thank you for the read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nice -- a poem captures a moment, and holds it out for everyone to share. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Standing quiet as the trees Listening movements of the leaves Dancing with a swish and sway Within the velvet black array I could get lost in a verse like this... and never want to seek an exit! *S* Excellent!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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