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swatcatpettus
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0 posted 2004-05-15 12:59 PM



I see an synergy
Of you and me
A love to want
A love to be
I wish you feel
The way I do
I wish you feel
That my love is true

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-15 03:37 AM


short and sweet
blackandwhitehorizon
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an akward state of mind
2 posted 2004-05-15 10:05 AM


different than the others I've read from you... and I like it

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-05-15 10:13 AM


you do have a softer side, and you wear it well
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-05-15 10:36 AM


Enjoyed the diversity of your write.
TD

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-05-19 01:11 AM


Nice writing...James
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