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WOMAN!
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WOMAN! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOMAN! On the concrete corner she was there, Five foot - eleven inches, and long blond hair. I moved into her aura: sweet papaya and lemon drops. Her lips were contagious, a lushes ruby-red candy shop. Her eyes so blue I could see Mercury and the heavenly stars reflected there. Temptation is that woman, flirtation there too, filtering my breath in the cool winter air, I became taken, lost in that woman’s stare… She pivoted slowly, with a smile as wide as Kansas, teeth as white as snow… I froze in my tracks, my eyes glazed over and I said: ‘Whoa’… Her words rolled out in slow motion, I think she said “Hi.” I lifted my hand and waved as if to say good bye… A wave as though I had a feather for a flag… She was WOMAN, and I was STAG, my thoughts ran wild and bounced through my head. I asked her to my home, she obliged, And followed me there, her and her long blond hair. We went to my bedroom and I closed and locked my door… I asked her to take off my shoes… she did, and kicked them across the floor. I asked her to take off my shirt…she did, and I could see, she was a flirt. I asked her to take off my pants, she did that without refrain… Then I said: ‘WOMAN, don’t EVER… let me see you wearing my clothes again!” |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Teehee... TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ROTFWL -- you made my day, JL!  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A good joke, made new again. Well done, Sir. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiles. Susan |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good one JL  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
 Thanks for that! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JL Enjoyed with a chuckle at the end. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is cute LOL |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
AWwwwwwwwww! Shame on you. Bon-Bon  |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
 LMAOwell written, i loved it |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
made me laugh too love a surprise at the end |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 smiling here ~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
LMAO thanks i needed that |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
LOL thanks for the chuckle. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
very cute. |
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