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When You Say Nothing At All
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When You Say Nothing At All |
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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
I remember the days when we didn't have to care. No matter what happened, we'd always be happy. But in the recent past we've both been irritable, Snapping at the smallest problem or disagreement. Now, as I try to observe us from an outsider's point-of-view, I see a couple trying to be as close as they once were. We spend our time together making each other smile and laugh, And in our private moments, we share warmth and intimacy. You have always wished to know what was going on in my head, I always answered simply that it was you. -The moments that we share are all that stick out in my mind... From the first time I had ever called you, To when I had seen or spoken to you last. In my life, you are powerful. Your words hold deeper meaning than any other. But it still amazes me, that sometimes when we're together... You say it best when you say nothing at all. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AK~ Welcome to Passions' circle of poets and friends~ 'You have always wished to know what was going on in my head, I always answered simply that it was you.' That is a STUNNING line ...~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
This is a great poem...did you know "you say it best when you say nothing at all" is also the title to a song...i think youd' really like the song Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP! Enjoyed the write -- yes, silence can be golden! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
welcome to passions enjoyed your poem will be looking for more |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and so goes the song welcome to Passions! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i extend my welcome as well, though i see you have been here a while already  i enjoyed your poem, i relate to it |
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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
thank you all for the warm welcome, and comments |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such clarity of expression is a real gift. Wonderful. ThisDiamond |
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