Open Poetry #32 |
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Waning Maiden |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
The Sun, along with it's horrid joy of Blaze, Finally sets in the subtle skies. Safe and alone, the Darkness comes out to play with childlike Stars or old. With the world engufled in black, a maiden comes forth. Marvel and Pity. Her face, soft and glowing, shines in an orb of Perfection. Her hair, pure and stright, dances on my face in twinkling Melody. Her silent cries are clear and desperate. Soften the coldest Hearts. I, with the world, can only watch with regreat. She dims and fades, waning as the Night loses hold. One last smile she gives and vanishes. Sweet and Painful. The Sun has risen now. ______________ There's a beautiful moon tonight. It's a soft crescent, pale and perfect. Don't get to see pretty skies at night very often in a city |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I, with the world, can only watch with regreat. She dims and fades, waning as the Night loses hold. One last smile she gives and vanishes. Sweet and Painful ![]() great write , glad i read this one i have felt this vibe too -wolf |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
George~ Write of the moon, and you've captured me in word-glow~ Stunning imagery~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful |
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