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CONFUSION
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
CONFUSION: Confusion is mold in the minds of the weak… It thrives on laziness, and there it eats… Taking away poise, and ones living discrete… The spoils of carelessness is defeat, beware… For even its rumor, is at your feet! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nothing confusing about this, very very well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes confusion is the root of all evil... OMG, why am I so confused?   Good one JL! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Ahhhhhh! I have mold on my mind. I wondered what was wrong. Now I know. Thanks JL Bon  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is an absolutely perfect truth you've posted, JL -- so very well done! Really, really thought this was perfect.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! |
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