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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2004-05-12 12:40 PM

Another lame attempt
Contructing poetry
Remember I'm just a Toerag
Only rhyme ocassionally
So I've tried Acrostic
To see how I might do
It sucks like most my others
Couldn't wait till I was through.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-12 12:45 PM

hehehehe

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2004-05-12 12:49 PM

Hey! Good shot and you hit the target too. LOL

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-05-12 01:22 PM

That's our toe, socks and all!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-05-12 01:31 PM

Well...I like it...Ya done good Toe!

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-05-12 01:41 PM

TOERAG

T errific
O ptomistic
E rotic
R ambunctious
A dmirable
G enerous

I enjoyed your 'acrostical' POME, Dear King of Rags! It's always a treat when you pop by!

Huggums,
EA

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-05-12 02:30 PM

and lol!

, too......jo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-05-12 02:56 PM

Toe,
I think EA said it best.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2004-05-12 03:16 PM

grins, sometimes you just have to write for the sake of writing

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-05-12 03:35 PM

Too funny! Cool.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-05-12 03:42 PM

I like it anyway.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

11 posted 2004-05-12 04:00 PM

clever one you are...
Enjoyed,
Sadie

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

12 posted 2004-05-12 07:34 PM

cute
and the poem is nice too..LOL

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2004-05-12 08:00 PM

ToeMan~
Who'd thunk the Toe
could acrostically go
off on a perfect POME
so very artistically so~

Me ? Yep !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2004-05-12 08:33 PM

HeeHee!! cute, Toe.

Hugs,
Ethel

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

15 posted 2004-05-12 11:29 PM

thanks for the laugh and smile, i can always count on you for lifting the spirits

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2004-05-12 11:46 PM

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

17 posted 2004-05-13 10:34 AM

You're cute when you write like this!

Corinne

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

18 posted 2004-05-13 10:55 AM

~smiling~...methinks you took the easy route.

M

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