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Weekend Getaway
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Weekend Getaway |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Watching the ocean bench press over 500 lbs Handing it to me, to my surprise I saw forthcoming surges increasing Gracious common style Showing off its trademark Lavishing care in absolute music in ambiance To be absorbed by dramatic art Waving to me, inviting me with a lovely smile Gifting me a pair of training wheels Extremely beloved and exotic An aria of atmosphere, with dramatic effects Reciting free will 3 times in a row Turing down an unknown avenue select Sensing great white wings growing in my heart Sensual octaves flooring my home Currency of which handed me headphones My mind raced to the escalator I was smashed to the core Enticing my impressions, where I decided to hang out There was an atmosphere of classical music whiteout Where love birds sang while ironing out wrinkles On my soul Serving elixirs on a galactic scale Producing synchronized standing waves From which I hitched a ride Into the blossom of twilight’s eyes I heard the note C repeating itself over and over Oh how we laughed and I never cared where I was going It seemed like, standing on the edge of Niagara Falls Transferring right into my cells, showing me photographs Of swans laying large eggs from which I came from Light ethereal playfulness giggled through my MP3 Lifting me unto the open heart of beauty Like sound carried over light waves of suspension Ascension into some precise dimension Like a higher octave, each one right after another Homing a kingdom unlocking space Standing there, looking deep into my eyes, face to face It is coherent and I centered all sound and trust There we formed guitar strings vibrating breath Spectrums of tiny colors dancing all around Laughing like children uninfluenced Someone handed me a Tibetan bowl Dolphins swam with me in a slow circular motion I heard two radio stations broadcast simultaneously “Are you hiring” I inquired, never asking the hourly rate They nodded with a smile while we Watched flowers blossom right before my eyes Bigger and bigger, with an exotic fragrance of heather & spices I had never known before 3 chakras jumped right inside the base of my spine Sending me through time…and there was no fear of singing karaoke Connecting my mind to an electric beam of synchronized dance Resonating and absorbing life, in an emotionally uplifting entrance |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Enticing my impressions, where I decided to hang out There was an atmosphere of classical music whiteout Where love birds sang while ironing out wrinkles On my soul Serving elixirs on a galactic scale Loved this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You make it all sound so simple, the way you intertwine your phrases and verses. Weekend Getaway, now that’s living, and what a time that must have been for you. Amazing write Lee J. Really enjoyed the read. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I admire how in-tune you are with the world and yourself |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
3 chakras jumped right inside the base of my spine Sending me through time…and there was no fear of singing karaoke Connecting my mind to an electric beam of synchronized dance Resonating and absorbing life, in an emotionally uplifting entrance no no need for that karaoke charade when you are the real thing |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
A Weekend Getaway like this sounds fabulous. Enjoyed, Lee! Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh, next time take me with you pleeease!!  Love this! Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This certainly was a Getaway for me. What a celestial place to be -- and the music, oh, the music!  .....jo |
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