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Puddle Squeezers
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Puddle Squeezers |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Puddle Squeezers ~~~ Squeezing puddles knee high in barley merely stains your Levis The rainbow's ore lies deep in the coldest stream Dreams in abundance litter the shoreline where aspiration surrenders to intimidation Empty hands are seldom wet past the elbow Wade deeper ... awaken your reverie If you continue |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes...jump in and let the dreams take form....Beautiful.... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Wade deeper ... awaken your reverie love this....wonderfully thought provoking |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Rex!! Good to read you here again! Loved this thought provoking write. ~Smiles & Hugs and wavin' a hand up the 401 at ya!~  ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely last lines |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This does squeeze a puddle... Welcome home, Rex! Dang it, stay awhile, will you? Please? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent advice. Great read. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Unique, and much enjoyed! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What an absolutely wonderful treat and surprise to read your poetry once more. Great food for thought in this well done poem. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Rex, And a treat to read your poetry the first time! Love it! Looking forward to more! Sadie |
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