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A Heart With Nowhere To Go
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A Heart With Nowhere To Go |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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A Heart With Nowhere To Go Mind sent in all directions A verse here and there Many open ended poems Are scattered everywhere At the incompletion stage On hold from yesterday Entangling with emotions Where knots seem to stay I am unable to fill the void Emotions go to and from My heart feeling shattered In failing to reach someone A heart with nowhere to go Each verse is falling apart Obviously he had forgotten His silence broke my heart Hope©2004 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my, Dear Hope! Your title, "A Heart With Nowhere To Go" is so sad ~ and incredibly poetic! It makes me want to give you a great big comforting HUG. The time will come when your heart will find a home away from home. One that will love, protect and honour it! ~ and deservedly so! Keep the faith! Hold on to hope!  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they don't care sometimes...it seems |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Linda for your thoughtful , caring reply , yes another poem with my heart yearning , I have been there before , so hopefully I will bounce back Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So true dixie !! Hope |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I like to think we can rise above these encounters to take from them that which was good and carry to the next one  Wow, what a title Hope, very hopeless, but as you say, you have been there before, and let's hope not again. Well done though my Austrailan friend. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sharon thank you ....yes I always seem to pull through , I know my heart can always find a place with friends on these pages of blue Hope |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice poetry. Enjoyed the read. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
A heart with nowhere to go Each verse is falling apart Obviously he had forgotten His silence broke my heart --- this aches *hug* nice write, kelly |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
The title really caught my eye...and the verses certainly didn't disappoint! "A heart with nowhere to go Each verse is falling apart Obviously he had forgotten His silence broke my heart" ...I guess everyone knows that feeling better than they would like. Beautifully put. Liz x "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My heart goes out to you as I feel the lonely pain of your words....**hugs** |
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