Open Poetry #32 |
For Her |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For Her I would do anything that time permits, her thinness wearing on me, wishing that clock would not tick so loudly this head aching for relief from thoughts that rise above the necessary whispering...hurry. The hugs hurt me more than her, bones see-through in my mind wishing I could shed some of my fat and gift it to her, padding her in comfort and leaving me a little less for wear...hurry No tears yesterday and none until tomorrow when all falls back to me and I am found cowering here and there...sharing moments fear showing its face, and the shivering that walks my body is neither from the cold nor heat, but from the rushing of thoughts wishing for a time warp or a miracle or hope... for the one who has Faith as her middle name. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
T’is a shame we can do so little at times When we wish to do so much I wish comfort and peace to both She and thee Gloom |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh Maureen, This was so open and so genuine it shook me...write...do write and do know that my prayers wrap around you both. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are finding some solace in letting it out in the blue, dear heart...your strength is a tribute to the love you have for your family. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friend~ This hurts ... and there is no balm for the heart-in-ache~ Love you and thinking of you and your Sis~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I know..and I wish I could help. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I would do anything that time permits, her thinness wearing on me, wishing that clock would not tick so loudly this head aching for relief from thoughts that rise above the necessary whispering...hurry. Excellent! You have a caring heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If there was something, anything I could do I would Maureen. You are such a good sister and I feel the ache in your words. ~Heart Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
All I can say is "hugs: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I were there to help |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you have a special heart, I am sure she knows...as do we.. ~~**~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you do have a special good heart, it is so nice to hear people who care about people.i wish you and her the best |
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