Open Poetry #32 |
Apple |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Left poisoned, it becomes a wicked fruit delectable as it carries a polished suit; handed to tease a maiden in distress a bite of this would lay stress to rest Apple of my heart, fruit of my eye baked into a perfect crusted pie; laid on window sills to catch a breeze wait till it cools down, will you please! While computers and red Grannies mix and Macintosh logos are bit and fixed, the Big Apple wears its finest attire nightlife screams over network wires... At one time it shone from a tree of Life but picked and eaten, meant certain strife, delectable, polished orbs donned crimson suits free to be poisoned, signaled an angel's flute... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-10-2004 01:58 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martin, I like what you've been doing with Apple and Orange. I'll be waiting for another. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I was waiting for this not that you are predictable or anything...I just kinda had the feeling this might be next after Orange |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing You're getting intuitive on me then... hehe, which is a good thing.. Ilana As long as you like it |
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