Open Poetry #32 |
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My Mama And Her Mama Before Her (re-post from #20 for Mother's Day) |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() ~* My Mama, And Her Mama Before Her *~ Papa up and died one day, just stopped. Two workers brought him back from the fields, cotton still stuck under his nails, and they said the Lord took him, he's free now, praise the Lord! I heard mama cry, then she whispered that she wished the Lord had taken her too. I was sure sure glad he didn't. I guess my Mama, and her Mama before her worked them fields of prickles and pain. My Mama worked the berry vines, or picked tomatoes and we all laughed when we saw her weathered black hands turn red, 'cause she never told us it was blood and not berry juice. She done woke us long before dem birds warbled anything sweet every morning, and on empty bellies we straggled. along behind her headed to them fields of pain where berries were breakfast. Hurry she'd always whisper, 'fore someone comes and sees ya. I reckon she wore dat same dress, shoes, and kerchief on her head saving herself from the sun’s stroke day in and day out, night in, night out. From farm to farm she carried the day's dirt of her labour to that hayloft. Ah we loved the nights. Mama sung to us and others joined in. They sung songs of our roots, our home, remindin us to neva forget we was after all black, and be proud of it. We learned new songs of freedom. Oh, that was gonna be a wonderful new day. From farm to forest, we followed her, little sojourners, working wherever Mama said the food of survival grew, all the while hoping someone would take us in so we didn’t have to walk no more. When it rained heavy we got to stay in one place sometimes two or three days, them was the closest times I felt. Well honey, now I’m free yes, but it ain’t no different really, ‘cept there is a little more food, for more work and discomfort. I still love to sing to my childrens all the songs my Mama done taught me. I suppose they will be singin them to their childrens they love too just like my Mama did, and her Mama before her. ~*~ I mean no disrespect by the english used in this poem. I was only trying to capture the time and place it might have taken place in. photo: personal Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful poem for Mother's Day! ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for bringing this back, Sharon...you've captured the time, and tone, so very well. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria Excellent write and read. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks for this Sharon. Happy Mum's Day. Maree ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I remember this one!!! great repost! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect!! One of my favourites from you! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, I do remember this. It gets better with time...just like you. Happy mother's day. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely....James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sharon, I hadn't read this one before! Wow, you captured the era and feel of this piece beautifully, well done. The part where you described the berry stains with the true toil of their mom was incredibly vivid ... very much enjoyed this! ![]() Hope you had a wonderful Mom's Day! ![]() Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah...this is a golden one. Thanks for reposting it. You captured the feel of the era and no one could take offence at it! ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks for putting up with a re-post as I am so busy with life these days, I miss you all in here, and do read but don't have time to sit to write, at least not now. I hope all have a lovely Mother's Day. I sure did ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful family story. Enjoyed the read. JL ![]() |
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