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Happy Mother's Dance
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Happy Mother's Dance |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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.jpg) Happy Mother’s Dance Sometimes in our righteous madness of correcting all the wrongs our men and children look at us thinking we are strong. All I know is, we could cavort, and twirl in lunacy as when our hearts are sorely pained in understanding ~ we. They think that we should know it all, by this brilliance in our eyes, as we scrabble for the words to hide harsh truths in sighs. For no one should, or ever will know all the truths we hold ~ though forever we, in words distill these moral skeins of gold… so should I spy your dancing feet, your arms upraised to skies as tears come shine upon your cheeks in life’s refrain’s reprise know I hear the hold of you know I see the gold in you. |
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velociraptor Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 12 |
Nice poem Sunshine a great one  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighhh Karilea... I'm keeping it. M xx  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Shhhhhhh - Don't say this to Sunshine - but - this is a "rhyming and metered" poem... and it makes me feel like dancing...  Happy Mother's Day, Sunshine...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
something a little different than the usual hallmark variety; your own signature style shining thru; have a happy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so should I spy your dancing feet, your arms upraised to skies as tears come shine upon your cheeks in life’s refrain’s reprise know I hear the hold of you know I see the gold in you. and in you.... Have a Wonderful Mother's Day, Karilea  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"so should I spy your dancing feet, your arms upraised to skies as tears come shine upon your cheeks in life’s refrain’s reprise know I hear the hold of you know I see the gold in you." Beautiful!!! Happy Mother's Day Karilea! ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Happy Mother's Day Karilea.... this is is a beautiful dance.... we see the gold in you every day!  ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I love it when you rhyme! Happy Mother's Day Karilea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Happy Mother's Day my dear woman. You are strikingly beautiful in every single word and way. TD |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My goodness, it's lovely and it rhymes. Happy Mother's Day Karilea, enjoy it. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How stunningly lovely this is, Karilea! Happy Mother's Day! Corinne (who had jelly and butter toast and raisin bran and cranberry juice brought to my bed at the crack of dawn by my son!) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Happy Mother's Day Karilea. Enjoy the dance. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brilliant, Karilea! Happy Mother's Day! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful tribute! Eric |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Karilea: This is a wonderful poem! I love it and I would like to keep it too. Happy Mother's Day to you also! Hope you've had a really nice day. Thank you Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea...So Tender and enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Sometimes knowledge withheld is wisdom dispensed. This is wonderful. Happy Mother's Day. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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